An Embarrassing Experience(Draft 1)
Many people came upon an embarrassing experience, so am I. A few months ago, I went to the bus stop by my mother's car. I took my bag, and went out of the car. I did that everyday. But on this day, I still wanted to sleep, so my head was very uncomfortable. As a result, I fell down from my mother's car, and hit the road at the moment. It was a very embarrassing event, because there were many students pay attention to me. At the same time, my face turned red. After this day, I told Mom that I hope she can moved the car far away from the bus stop, because if I fall down again, nobody will see me. I can not stop myself to remember that day now,because is was a very embarrassing experience.

3 Comments:
1.我覺得so I had a headache。比較好。2.There were many students paying attention to me.
妳那次跌得真的很嚴重…God bless you。
I can not stop myself to remember that day now,because is was a .....because前面不用加逗號吧!!
because is was a very embarrassing experience.
怎麼會有兩個beV.呢?
so am I->so did I
很痛吧!!要小心唷!!
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