Learning English (Draft 1)
Learning Enghish is important nowadays, Why is it important?First, we can use English around the world, if you donot know English, it is inconvenient for you to travel abroad. In addition, English is necessary for many works, if your English is good, your chances of promotion will become more, so you can have more and more opportunities to get higher positions. Third, you can make the foreign friends, it is a good method to increase your relationship. English can connect the people of different countries. In short, English is a necessary language in the world.

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Learning Enghish is important nowadays, Why is it important?
第一句加上....is getting more and
more important nowadays, 感覺比較有power (也順便可以塞字數)
w應該變小寫 粗心~!
Learning Enghish
english
Why is it important?First,
why是小寫 或你前面改句號
First前面空兩格
if you donot know English
do not
1.Why is it important?前面應該加句點2.donot應該要隔開
3.我覺得 ,so you can have more and more 可以改and you can
Why的w 要變小寫喔!!
donot know English->don't know English
if your English is good->我覺得改成if you speak English well比較好ㄟ....
your chances of promotion will become more->your chances of promotion will become better
錯誤都被挑完了...不過整個感覺還滿ok的!
沒想到英雄所見略同,我想講得都被說光了
大家的想法都差不多...他們的意見就是我的意見!!^^
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