Things I like to do on the weekend [Draft 1]
There are many things I like to do on weekends, I always free on weekends, so I need to find some things to do. The thing I like the most is surfing the Internet, Internet is important thing to link people who not stay in same country. I like use it to chat with my friends and find some interesting articles or pictures. Second is reading books. I love reading very much, novels and comic books are my favorite. Reading is interesting, and it can help me relax. Third is seeing the movie, I always go to see the movie with my friends, it let us happy and increase our friendship too. Weekends are the days we can really relax, I wish I can make my weekends full of happiness.
posted by Ryuka(暐) at 7:01 PM
6 Comments:
1.I "am" always free on weekends
2.who "do" not stay in "the" same country
p.s.妳真的很可怕，一學期可以看那麼多書！
I "am" always.....
Weekends are the days we can really relax,那個the days既然是複數就不用加the
1.I always free on weekends應該是I'm free
2. The thing I like the most is surfing the Internet,本人覺得I like surfing the Internet the best要不然怪怪的
3.Internet is important thing to link people who not stay in same country.我覺得.Internet is important thing to link 可以加the 或用最高級還有，not stay in same country.應該是don't stay
4.I like use it 用using要不然二個動詞撞到
5.Second is reading books.如果用second上面那一點就用first而且當副詞用應該用逗號之類的
6. I love reading very much, novels and comic books are my favorite.中間應該可以用句號重新一個句子
7.還有就是relax可以用一些其他字表示要不然有重複感
There are many things I like to do on weekends, I always..
感覺I always 開始是新的一句耶
The thing I like the most
most 應該用best
The thing I like the most is surfing the Internet, Internet is
Internet應該可以用it
1.. I "am" always free on weekends, so I need to find some things to do.
->some things->something
2..who "do" not stay in "the" same country
3..it let us happy and increase our friendship too.->too前面要加逗號吧!
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