TV Programs [Draft1]
Be careful of choose television programs is very important. Though, television is the most important channel to provide information and entertainment, but probably it has some disadvantage. Some programs have bad affect to the teenagers which are filled with violence and lust. Spending too much time watching television do harm to our eyesight. Therefore, we should choose the programs which are good for us. The most important thing is do not be a couch potato.
posted by Ryuka(暐) at 8:32 PM
7 Comments:
1.Be careful of choose 要加ing
2.television programs is very important.到底要複數還是單數
1. "choosing" television programs "carefully" is very important.
2.Some programs have bad affect to the teenagers "which are filled with violence and lust." which 這段要插在programs後
3.Spending too much time watching television "does" harm to our eyesight
1.Though, television is the most important channel 那個though是連接詞不用放逗點
2.Some programs have bad affect 那個affect是動詞，名詞是effect
watching television do harm to
do>>does
1..Be careful of "choose"television programs is very important->choosing
2..Spending too much time watching television "do" harm to our eyesight->does
Though, television is the most ...不用用逗點
of式介係詞喔!!要加ing
though和but不能加在一起
disadvantage要加"s"
affect是動詞...effect on
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