My Favorite Season [draft 2]

My favorite season is spring. There are many reasons to explain why I love it. Firstly, it symbolizes new life and rebirth. For example, various flowers bloom, green grass shoots and plants come into bud. Besides, the dormant animals come to life, too. Moreover, spring plays an important role in nature’s cycle. Secondly, the weather in spring is refreshing. Fresh breezes make the temperature suitable. Therefore, no matter where I stay, and where I live, I can feel comfortable in this season. Because of the appropriate weather, spring becomes the most extraordinary time which has soft sunshine and incredible rebirth of the year. At last, spring is the most significant time, because it is the first season of every year. Consequently, it is a great time for me to establish good foundations for the year. If I set many fundamental plans in this season, I believe I can do everything extremely prefect.

The Differents between Animations and Comics [Draft-1]

Maybe many people think animations are almost the same as comics. Actually, they are very different. In my opinion, there are some features that can distinguish the diversities between animations and comics. First, animations are dynamic, so we can see that the characters are movable. On top of this, animations are audio that we can heard the voice when we watch it. On the other hand, comics are static and they are silent. They exist just by various of lines. Consequently, unlike animations, comics can not lead us to the vivid and active world. What is more, a most all animations are created by computers while comics are always man-made. In fact, animations were man-made also. However, with the progress of technology animations are made with computer now. On the contrary, the artists of comics are still persist in artificial. Rest on the points above, animations and comics are very distinctive.

My Favorite Season [draft 1]

My favorite season is spring. There are many reasons to explain why I love it. Firstly, it symbolizes new life and rebirth. For example, various flowers bloom, green grass shoot and plants come into bud. Besides, the dormant animals come to life, too. Moreover, spring plays an important role in nature’s cycle. Secondly, the weather in spring is refreshing. Fresh breezes make the temperature suitable. Therefore, no matter where I stay, and where I live, I can feel comfortable in this season. Because of the appropriate weather, spring becomes the most extraordinary time which has soft sunshine and incredible rebirth of the year. At last, spring is the most significant time, because it is the first season of every year. Consequently, it is a great time for me to establish good foundations for the year. If I set many fundamental plans in this season, I believe I can do everything extremely prefect.


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A Day I'll Never Forget [draft2]

I'll never forget the day that happened a year ago. It was a cloudy day that my friend Alice and I took pictures in the park. We had a good time this afternoon. When we approached an old building near the park, some strange things happened. Alice intensely shivered without expectation. I was shocked and tried to soothe her, but she shivered mote serious. To made matter worse, it was out of her control. Furthermore, she talked to herself with hoarse voice. I tried to understand what she said but in vain. Suddenly, sky turned dim, sending a chill down my spine. Although I was so scared I still managed to take her to the nearest temple. The abbot in that temple said Alice had a mysterious ability which urged her to touch the unknown world. To be brief, she was threatened by the ghost! The abbot took the ghost away from Alice's body, after that, she recovered from shivering. Alice and I thanked to the abbot; moreover, Alice was extremely surprised at her marvelous body. It was really a special day. I bet I'll keep it in my mind forever.

A Day I'll Never Forget [draft1]

I'll never forget the day a year ago. It was a cloudy day that my friend Alice and I took pictures in the park. We had a good time this afternoon. When we approached an old building near the park, some strange things happened. Alice intensely shivered without expection. I was shock and tried to smooth her, but she shivered mote serious. To made matter worse, it was out of her control. Furthermore, she talked to herself with hoarse voice. I tried to understand what she said but in vain. Suddenly, sky turned dim, sending a chill down my spine. Although I really so scared I still managed to take her to the nearest temple. The abbot in that temple said Alice had a mysterious ability which urged her to touch the unknown world. To be brief, she was threatened by the ghost! The abbot took the ghost away from Alice's body, after that, she recovered from shivering. Alice and I thanked to the abbot; moreover, Alice was extremely surprised at her marvelous body. It was really a special day. It bet I'll keep it in my mind forever.

A dream I had [draft 2]

Everyone has had been dreaming. Some dreams are wonderful while others are terrible. I had a marvelous dream last night. In the dream I went to school as usual, and on my way to school, a witch appeared in front of me out of the blue. She told me that she would attack my school and kill everybody, then she flew away. It made me afraid, so I ran to school in a hurry. When I got to the street behind my school, I was surprised at the condition─ My school was gone! Suddenly, the witch appeared, laughing loudly, and she said she had cast a spell on everyone to ruin them, with that she indicated that I would be the next one. I tried to escape in vain, so I decided to fight her and I threw a stone at her. To my surprise, she turned into a smoke after being hit by me, then the smoke disappeared. A math book lay on the place where the witch had been. Finally I woke up, this dream may mean that I ‘m really afraid of math and want to avoid it, but after doing this dream, I decided to try to overcome this challenge from now on.

A dream I had [draft 1]

Everyone has had been dreaming, some dreams are wonderful but others maybe terrible. I had a marvelous dream last night. In the dream I went to school as usual, on my way to school, a witch appeared in front of me out of the blue. She told me that she would attack my school and killed everybody, then she would flew away. It made me afraid, so I ran to school in rush, but when I got to the street behind my school, I was surprised at the condition─ My school was gone! Suddenly, the witch appeared laughing loudly, she said she had cast a spell on everyone to ruin them, with that she indicated that I would be the next one. I tried to escape but in vain, so I decided to fright her and threw a stone at her. To my surprise, she turned into a smoke after been hit by me, then the smoke disappeared. A math book lay on the place where the witch had been. Finally I woke up, this dream may mean that I ‘m really afraid of math and want to avoid it, but after doing this dream I decided to try to overcome this challenge from now on.