A Day I'll Never Forget [draft2]

I'll never forget the day that happened a year ago. It was a cloudy day that my friend Alice and I took pictures in the park. We had a good time this afternoon. When we approached an old building near the park, some strange things happened. Alice intensely shivered without expectation. I was shocked and tried to soothe her, but she shivered mote serious. To made matter worse, it was out of her control. Furthermore, she talked to herself with hoarse voice. I tried to understand what she said but in vain. Suddenly, sky turned dim, sending a chill down my spine. Although I was so scared I still managed to take her to the nearest temple. The abbot in that temple said Alice had a mysterious ability which urged her to touch the unknown world. To be brief, she was threatened by the ghost! The abbot took the ghost away from Alice's body, after that, she recovered from shivering. Alice and I thanked to the abbot; moreover, Alice was extremely surprised at her marvelous body. It was really a special day. I bet I'll keep it in my mind forever.