Making Decision [Draft 1]
Growing up means making my own decisions. When I was a little girl, I could not make any decisions. But now I am a grown-up. I am independent enough to handle difficulties, and do not have to relay on my parents. Therefore, I am supports to decide various problems and questions.
The hardest decision that I ever made was choosing the senior high school. When I just graduated from junior high school, I was admitted into the senior high school and the vocational school at the same time. I could not chose the school in this two quickly at that time. After all, this two schools are extremely different no matter the subjects and the future. So I thought about many things and did not ignore every questions to make the decision. Finally, I chose the vocational school. I learned not merely many interesting things but made some indeed friends in this school. I was not regret and I though I made a good decision.
The hardest decision that I ever made was choosing the senior high school. When I just graduated from junior high school, I was admitted into the senior high school and the vocational school at the same time. I could not chose the school in this two quickly at that time. After all, this two schools are extremely different no matter the subjects and the future. So I thought about many things and did not ignore every questions to make the decision. Finally, I chose the vocational school. I learned not merely many interesting things but made some indeed friends in this school. I was not regret and I though I made a good decision.

7 Comments:
I "was not regret" and I though I made a good decision.
應該是"didn't regret"
1. I am "supposed" to decide various problems and questions.
好好笑喔妳,寫什麼support
2. I could not "choose" the school "between them" at that time.
3."these" two schools are extremely different "in" the subjects "or" the future.
4. I "did" not regret and I though I made a good decision.
I learned not merely many interesting things but made>>not後面要only
I was not regret>>是didn't
1.I am supports to decide various problems and questions.
你的那個support是什麼詞性啊?如果是形容詞的話要改一下
1.I could not chose the school in this two quickly at that time.這句是怎麼回事阿
2.this two schools 不要照字義翻啦
1..relay on ->拼錯->rely on
2..I am supports to->怪怪的..應該是am supposed to 吧!
regret(V.)->"didn't" regret
am "supposed" to
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