Monday, April 16, 2007

Autobiography-1[Draft 1]

I was born in Taichung city in 1990. My name is Wei Chang. There are three members in my family. My mother is a beauty and intelligent woman. She divorced my father when I was a junior high school student, but, as it was, I hardly saw my father in my childhood, so my mother supported my sister and I only by herself. My sister is my good friend , too. We understand each other and always chat about everything. She is good at study and she is earnest in the things what she do. Even though this family has no father, it still full of love.

My hobbits are reading and thinking. Reading is very interesting. I suck up a lot of knowledge from the books. There are many kinds of book I love, but classics is my favorite. I also try my hand at reading English books or Japaness books, it is fun and profitable. I like thinking any time and any where. Thinking is interesting, too. By thinking, I can understand many things and find the better way to solve the questions. However, when I meet the difficult things, I will do my best to knock it over.

6 Comments:

Blogger FawnYma said...

1.My mother is a beauty and "an" intelligent woman.
2.She is good at "studying"
3My "habits"
4.I "soak" up a lot of knowledge from the books.我覺得用現在式就可以了

11:53 PM  
Blogger 許雅婷 said...

1.She is good at study是studying
2.My hobbits 應該是hobbies
3.I also try my hand at reading 什麼是try my hand

7:31 AM  
Blogger Samantha*霓∥ said...

earnest in the things what she do>>does
I also try my hand at reading English books or Japaness books>>Japanese
She is good at study>>studying

7:31 AM  
Blogger 梁宜靜 said...

1.."an"intelligent
2..She is good at study ->studying

7:53 AM  
Blogger Butterfly said...

1. My mother is a beauty and intelligent woman. 用beautiful

2., but, as it was, I hardly saw my father in my childhood這且這樣真的很怪,我看不懂

3.my mother supported my sister and I only by herself那個你媽媽現在還是獨自扶養你們的話用現在式就好了

4.She is good at study and she is earnest in the things what she do用what的話the things就不用了

5.it still full of love.
要有be 動詞

6.My hobbits are reading and thinking.應該是hobbies

7.However, when I meet the difficult things, I will do my best to knock it over.
這句跟前面感覺有點不搭

4:08 AM  
Blogger Tina said...

"an" intelligent
She is good at "studying"
what she "does"
habit習慣V.S.hobby嗜好
"Japanese" books

5:54 AM  

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